Sometimes, incorporating a famous quote (or perhaps a lesser-known quote by a well-known person) into one of your application essays can add a little something special to the story you are trying to tell. If the quotation truly enhances your message in a significant way, it can serve as an effective tool, making your submission that much more compelling. Consider the following examples:
Example 1:
“The best executive is the one who has sense enough to pick good men to do what he wants done, and self-restraint enough to keep from meddling with them while they do it.”
– Theodore Roosevelt
Roosevelt’s words are as true today as when he spoke them. The essence of a manager is…
Example 2:
As Peter F. Drucker said, “Management is doing things right; leadership is doing the right things.” I have found the distinction between management and leadership especially important…
However, some candidates may be tempted to use a quotation as a kind of crutch, essentially relying on someone else’s clever or poignant wordsmanship to take the place of their own. Think of this option as a way of enriching an already interesting narrative, rather than as an easy shortcut to a more impressive essay.
Before using a quotation in your writing, ask yourself these three questions:
• Does the quotation fit the essay’s main theme?
• Does the quotation reflect who you are or what you believe?
• Does the quotation truly enhance the essay?
If you can answer “yes” to all three questions, making the quotation a part of your essay might be a good idea. But first make sure that your story is sufficiently strong to stand on its own, even without the quote, and limit yourself to just one quotation per application (not per essay).
